What's missing from this YouTube Short?

Hey guys!

I recently went through a short form content creation course (not the one in ossa.ai classroom) in order to create better videos for my clients, but frankly the final product of the videos just aren't quite hitting the mark. Something about them just feels "off" so I'm going through each step of the process to see what it could be.

Attached is an example of a video we produced that got more views than the other ones. I'm not sure why, and it only got ~500 views so I know it could be better, however this will give a small peek into behind the scenes.

Here's the script for the video in case that makes it easier to spot issues:

"HOOK: If you’re failing to prepare for unexpected occasions in your short term rentals, you’re preparing to fail… for unexpected occasions in your short term rentals.

BODY: I point this out because I’ve had guests before that seem to need everything under the sun, and it happened enough times that I finally was like “you know what, I need to go on the offensive here.”

People usually request extra supplies like blankets or kitchen utensils, so I thought that if I included those things in our properties ahead of time then we could probably put the time and energy in up front to get those supplies there and then not ever have to worry about it again.

This hypothesis was true. And preparing ahead of time DID help, and if you want to learn other ways that you can save yourself a bunch of time and make a ton of money with short term rentals, then head to the link in my bio so I can teach you how to do it."

The actual video is linked!

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