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Hi closers!

I'm taking on a new project, bringing disruptive technology to the avocado business. The avocado is what's sold and not the technology, and we want to pique interest in scheduling a meeting while keeping the product details under wraps. What do you guys think about this message as an intro?

Hi buyer,

I noticed avocados are an essential piece of your supply chain. My name is Fernando, and I’m with Avo Foods. We are introducing a product to revolutionize the avocado industry—hint: fresh-cut avocados with a very long shelf life.

Our disruptive avocados will allow you to save on costs and reduce risk through transporting and storing efficiencies, waste reduction, and increased operational safety. These avocados display all the incredible features everyone loves while alleviating many of the headaches of managing its supply chain.

If it sounds exciting to have your avocados fresh and ripe when you need them, we’d like to show you more and get samples into your hands. These avocados are so unbelievable that you must see them in person! When would you be open to meeting and seeing more in person?

Thanks for your time, and I look forward to chatting with you soon.

Would love to hear what you think! Thanks in advance.

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