I'm sorry for adding a link but I don't know how to give a sales page for critique if anyone knows let me know too. This is the sales page https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ktlZgyYaSq2kxBeiMZZc8F0cSai_PeC81rH9ZKRK7lw/edit?usp=sharing

Writing a new eBook about how to piece together copywriting through logical deduction and critical thinking: - Introduction to techniques for thinking more clearly - Full example funnel builds - Leveraging AI to do the "heavy lifting" of thought work. Does this sound interesting to ya'll? (suggest good names for it!)

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I wanna link a sales page that I wrote and I would like to have some comments on that but, as mentioned in the video (that admin says to watch) so it only tells about a "how to get a critique on email" not on sales page so, I'm confused in how to post a sales page for critique? However, here's the page I wrote https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CV2dK8mG3kG4kNmOCOjhHQViYtA77QSgRmwjFX5CFcA/edit?usp=sharing

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