What is the level of awareness of the prospect? If it is solution aware or higher then the copy is decent. If it’s lower than that then it might be a problem.

Hi there, Your opening was good. But this copy lacks intrigue. When I started reading the first few lines it felt like a good PAS. But you see there was no agitation, you directly told the readers that it’s a course. “with my fitness coaching sessions we just make this curse disappear, and make guys like you reach their dream body” How can you improve this? Maybe try adding ‘a story about someone who got the results and how they are very happy and motivated’ we like to hear about success stories. This will do 2 things - 1. Give people a proof that your product/training/course works. 2. Build more intrigue. Also there are some grammatical errors but those can be fixed easily. Thank you

Have you shown him your Portfolio? If he needs the evidence so bad you can go on Upwork and Fiverr and search for clients. Tell them you’ll work for free but you need some testimonials either video or written. Or you can do something like “ I’ll work for month for free (or for $500), he only have to play the full price if he is happy with your work/resluts.”

@Marlon Cabeza Thank you for your suggestion.

I am Karan from India. I am 21 years old. I found about copywriting nearly a year ago, but only now have I started to take it seriously. Currently my monthly revenue is $0. I am not going to niche down till I have $2k client. I spend nearly 8 - 10 hours daily practising copy for the past few days. My goal is to start making $10k+/ month before December 2025. I am working towards achieving my goals and hope that with you guys I’ll have some healthy competition.