@Karar Hussain it is a welcome email. Totally understand what you are saying however, the value in this case is getting onto the email list which would be a guide to them getting to their dream body. obviously if the client has a lead magnet or can be created that could be the first value in the email that will be provided. Do you get what I mean? But I appreciate it!

@Albin Banatskiy Hmm that makes sense Albin. Appreciate it man, will have a look at your copy and give you a review

@Sifiso Kutoane Drop a review on my copy and I will give you the review.

no commenter access bro

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1spGRUdrE5BTy3s3IywGUq77Q3Q3m2TGIklRpGqFGk3I/edit?usp=sharing Hello, can I get a review please? Thanks

@Chetan Rao I appreciate the review man! You can shoot one of your pieces of copy my way if you want a review

Hey Aleks, would appreciate a review https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gmFnJ0YZYJSYIeFV4r_IR5BNyqi-e6HZJbSsofKe7vI/edit?usp=share_link

@Favour Amaechi Honestly, that's a very good email packed with value, good definition of the pain points. But a couple of improvement 1. Share your document with suggestions enabled for viewers 2. The beginning was focused on you or the writer rather than the viewer which could get them disinterested to read the remaining part of the email which is where the sauce actually lies. 3. I saw there was a discount at the end of email, so tease it at the beginning to increase engagement, that could require you to change the approach at the begninning of the email. asides that, the email was good

Would appreciate a review on my copy. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gmFnJ0YZYJSYIeFV4r_IR5BNyqi-e6HZJbSsofKe7vI/edit?usp=sharing