Ready to get roasted 😆 All feedback is much appreciated. Thank you! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LhHhJ0RRufAx6e73dcyAmwz9MRGnbcq2-z2cu5YmOxQ/edit?usp=sharing
@Petrut Budica mr blue reviewed the first and said the flow and cta was off and I should stop the short sentences and about the lose weight, I do that so later on I have another email to write about on what foods to eat to lose weight/get shredded