Feedback - New Video "Freedom" - song and story

ok from the feedback I got, I did a lot less editing and graphics and kept it simple.

For the story part I added it into INSHOT for the AI editing to cut out too many spaces. I don't think it has an option in the capcut version I have.

The original songs I am posting are left over from a few weeks ago when I recorded 9 of them so there are still things I need to remember for future videos.

My areas that I think I can improve still.

Smile more
Audio - I know I can make this much better, I need a better set up currently its just my phone but when I add a little reverb it makes it a little lo fi or muffled I think.
I dont think Im not an ugly guy nor a model but I think the lighting and filters need some work. Im not sure where to go with this either. I would like to make it look natural and enough filter to not look like a scary guy in an alley lol

Any thoughts are appreciated.

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