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So, I have really improved my "song and story" videos because of the feedback here, so thank you. Here is a new one.Im trying to maintain interest in the first 30 seconds so what I have done was

Done close ups and moving with the editing but not too much so it makes people dizzy.
I have also learned that I need to smile more, which I wont be doing as much in the next 8 videos as I already recorded them.
My next step is to do a bunch of covers.
Im posting 3x per week for the next couple months, every wed Ill have a song from my live show at City winery.

https://youtu.be/HTmuwYky3vQ

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