See Results From Copy We Voted On! (How did we do?)

Sent 630 invites this week with the copy we voted on 2 weeks ago, here's the results compared to our strongest copy...

OUR COPY (TEST):

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Hey [[name]], I share tips & examples of how [[avatar]] makes more money with [[service]]. If that helps you, connect with me!

Actual:

Hey John, I share tips & examples of how developers make more money with green incentives. If that helps you, connect with me!

Connection Requests Sent:

630

Connected:

Connection Rate:

6.5% (gross)

Standard Message (Baseline):

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Look forward to connecting [[name]]! [[avatar]], are eligible for [[benefit]] via [[our service]]. Hope to explore this opportunity with you. All the best - [[your name]]

Actual:

Look forward to connection John! Your developments are eligible for $2.50-$5.65 per sqft via 179D program. Hope to explore this opportunity with you. All the best - Jonny

Connection Requests Sent:

786

Connected:

156

Connection Rate:

19.8% (great)

Hats off to Jonny for making this piece of copy, it's simple but has worked for us for a while.

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