i am working on a track , and i want feedback from you , https://soundcloud.com/user-523494259/serene-waves-synth/s-aiE67WnDU2Q?si=9409681a8dd244e2b62fd7a3b74eb6ea&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

https://youtu.be/HrEU6WBLy_I

I made some wrong decisions in the flow phase so I ended up with way too many ideas. And I'm not that fast and work in short sessions so I'm way past the 10 challenge deadline. But I am learning a lot! So now I finished my composition. Any feedback on the composition / arrangement is welcome! https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/wc2tnkn03q7y3fzhikxo1/2024-09-04-Ten-Day-Compose-v4.mp3?rlkey=6wb035mf8d8t1wfrdtpcvmer5&dl=0

had to completely recreate everything in logic and use their drums and whatnot but at least there's something for compose finally. https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/ss6ajuvufjzem6evfsrh1/Third-Times-a-Charm.logicx.mp3?rlkey=60z72361bycp5qaoqd5i8pptm&dl=0

I guess this is my first post. My name is Shari, I'm a singer, songwriter & vocal coach and I am self employed and don't always have time to focus on my own music even though I work with other singers on their voices. It felt good to make music this past Friday! I used ProTools even though I will probably be switching to Logic soon. I really need to dive into this course and apply some principles to mixing, but I was proud of myself for doing a little bit of delay in this mix haha. I attached a video of my process as well as the final song. All I ever use on my vocals is Maserati even though I have other plugins too. How do you guys make time to learn and also work? haha.. I'm going carve out time every week to tackle the course. Anyway would love any feedback!