All my public videos and program videos are scripted. I have found clearly articulating my ideas off-riff to be not so good. I haven't yet found a way to create clear structure in my mind as I go. So I generally write out my script and refine it, then read from a teleprompter. So for this homework, I went unscripted, and unplanned. I started with the idea I wanted to embody "The Motivator" which is an archetype I have not been good at. The only thing I planned was "I want to tell you a story about Tony"... On review of the video, here is my own assessment: Essence - Good Presence - Good Image - Average (definitely want a better Image / location / studio / lighting. I feel movement and eye contact are excellent Sound - Good (want equipment upgrades) Language - OK (a few fillers I discovered on review, and without structure it's a bit of a ramble) Pace - Excellent Pitch - Great Power - OK Pause - Excellent I found without a script I had no structure, and so the video took it's own path, and ended up not being about Tony so much. So I had to bring that around at the end. It ended up being over 8 minutes which surprised me, I thought I talked for about 3 minutes. lol The Two things I feel require the most attention are - Structure on the fly (I have zero idea how to improve this) Eg "hook/problem == solution == etc" - Copy writing - increase IMPACT, less waffle. Looking forward to other perspectives. Go your hardest! https://youtu.be/AlteW2fJheE

I really enjoyed this exercise, I can already see where I can improve but overall I can already see improvements by having the awareness on how to better master a message. 😃 I want to implement more warrior energy 😅 Would love some feedback 🙏

Wow I loved reading so many of your introductions and I'm so excited to be part of this journey with you! I want to connect more and grow together. Share your Instagram/social links below so we can all follow each others journey of Mastering Your Message and support each other along the journey. 🙏 Infinite gratitude to Nico for sharing one of his many gifts with us.

Hi Everybody! Im a feminine embodiment coach helping burnt out moms nourish themselves through energy work, embodiment ritual so they can fully express themselves. If anyone wants to connect on social media my new handle is @meghan.nicole.inc and I would love to connect with you too. Here is my recent success story! I would appreciate any feedback thank you! https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JFJgtfpyQ5pqjhqcLi5G5-OeLzICOWqP/view?usp=drive_link