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[WEEKLY REVIEW] Headline Masterclass Part 2
👉 The Copy
We've got a headline today from a 4D student, let's check it out. 👇
- Eyebrow Copy: ATTENTION: Don’t try to grow your social media brand until you watch this…
- Main Headline: How To Go From $0 To $10k-100k/mo In As Little As 30 Days With Our 1-on-1 “Unfair Advantage” Brand Growth System That Has Generated Over $13,864,701 In Cash For Niche Experts And Stuck Business Owners
- Deck Copy: Even if you’re a total beginner, don’t know what to post, orand have zero followers.
Now before I tear up this headline to shreds, if you want regular 1-on-1 reviews just for you like this (whether it's copy, outreach, your profile, etc.)...
...Go ahead and DM me "111" and I'll be checking my inbox over the next couple of days.
Otherwise, let's continue.
👉 The Review
- Eyebrow Copy:
It works but it could be more specific.
"Try to grow" what does that mean? Saying ATTENTION: Don't post on Instagram until you watch this... would be better
- Main Headline:
This headline is WAYYYYYYYYY too complex lol.
Simplify it and focus on one main point.
Also, $100k/mo in 30 days is way too unrealistic of a claim.
Here's a simpler example - This Instagram Growth System Has Generated $13,864,701. Install It In Your Business For Free.
- Deck Copy:
The current copy works, but I'd make it more concise and just address the main concern and that's it.
Example - Works no matter how many followers you have
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[WEEKLY REVIEW] Headline Masterclass Part 2
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