👉 The Copy We've got a headline today from a 4D student, let's check it out. 👇 - Eyebrow Copy: ATTENTION: Don’t try to grow your social media brand until you watch this… - Main Headline: How To Go From $0 To $10k-100k/mo In As Little As 30 Days With Our 1-on-1 “Unfair Advantage” Brand Growth System That Has Generated Over $13,864,701 In Cash For Niche Experts And Stuck Business Owners - Deck Copy: Even if you’re a total beginner, don’t know what to post, orand have zero followers. Now before I tear up this headline to shreds, if you want regular 1-on-1 reviews just for you like this (whether it's copy, outreach, your profile, etc.)... ...Go ahead and DM me "111" and I'll be checking my inbox over the next couple of days. Otherwise, let's continue. 👉 The Review - Eyebrow Copy: It works but it could be more specific. "Try to grow" what does that mean? Saying ATTENTION: Don't post on Instagram until you watch this... would be better - Main Headline: This headline is WAYYYYYYYYY too complex lol. Simplify it and focus on one main point. Also, $100k/mo in 30 days is way too unrealistic of a claim. Here's a simpler example - This Instagram Growth System Has Generated $13,864,701. Install It In Your Business For Free. - Deck Copy: The current copy works, but I'd make it more concise and just address the main concern and that's it. Example - Works no matter how many followers you have

👉 The Copy I decided to pick a few subject lines from the 4D Academy channel and review them today. Here are 3 subject lines from the students 👇 - SL1: Why I only hang out with rich people - SL2: I thought I was screwed… 😵 - SL3: Here’s your ticket to success, %FIRSTNAME% 👉 The Review: - Subject Line 1 This one is WAYYY too obvious. It's like saying "Why I run to stay healthy" Duh. People already know the answer. They know you already hang out with rich people because it helps you make more money. My advice: make it less obvious and go more from a curiosity angle. - Subject Line 2 I actually like this one, although it depends on where you place it in the sequence/campaign. If it's one of the first emails, I'd consider pushing this one back until the audience is more aware of you and have built a better relationship. The reason for this is because if they don't know who you are, they aren't going to care as much about your story. But with that being said, I still like it because using the emoji combined with the SL implies that the email is about a story of how you almost died, and who doesn't like drama? - Subject Line 3 Again, this is super vague. Success? What does success even mean? It means a completely different thing in every niche. For fitness, "success" can mean being healthy, getting lean, building muscle, healing joints, healing your energy, etc. For business, "success" can mean making lots of money, improving margins, getting more clients, lowering ad costs, etc. Same thing for relationships. So this SL is super vague, plus I've seen this same thing multiple times before. Come up with something unique and different. 👉 Now, if you want me to personally help you and review your copy daily like this, DM me "SL" and I'll be checking my inbox over the next couple days to talk and help you.

👉 The Copy These are 2 landing page headlines from the free discord server. Headline 1: Eyebrow: For IG influencers under a million followers who want to know exactly how to Headline: convert their followers into money bags Deck: Without needing a massive audience, being a slave to the algorithm, or having a thousand likes per post. Headline 2: Eyebrow: Introducing the Newly built Headline: Anti-social funnel Deck: the anti-algorithm technique for turning social media attention into sales 👉 The Review Headline 1: - For those who don't know, "eyebrow" copy is small text above the main, big headline. "Deck" copy is below the main headline. Most people only read the main headline, so if you take out the eyebrow and deck copy and just read "Convert their followers into money bags", it makes absolutely zero sense. - Clarity is key in headlines. - In the deck copy, it's very lengthy and wordy, which is not what we want. We want something simple. For that, reason, I'd shorten it. - The main headline is just okay. It has a promise ("convert followers into money bags") but there's nothing new or unique about it. There's no promise. UPDATED HEADLINE COPY: Eyebrow: IG creators under a million followers.... Headline: How To Build & Monetize A Following Of 100,000 Die-Hard Fans Before 2025 Deck: Even if you currently have little to no following Headline 2: - Same comment I had here for the first one; the main headline makes zero sense if you don't read the eyebrow/deck copy. - How newly built is this funnel? Why should I care? Be much more specific and it'll be more believable. - You use two different mechanisms ("Anti-social" and "anti-algorithm") which makes this headline too confusing. UPDATED HEADLINE COPY: Eyebrow: The #1 Instagram growth strategy of 2025 Headline: The "Anti-Social" Funnel That's Allowing Creators Across The World Build 100k+ Followings In Under 90 Days Deck: Brand-new way to convert attention into sales

👉 The Copy This is a sales page headline from @life 👇 The Headline: Attention: Dropshippers struggling to get over $259/m… Start making $10k/mo just like my student Derek as fast as possible with the NEW “Magnetic sales” system to drive more profit to the business for FREE While only working 3 hours per day, learning at the same time and getting access to a network of businessmen. 👉 The Review - In the audience callout ("Attention dropshippers struggling to get over $259/mo") the number is so random that it doesn't make any sense. It would be a much better callout if you identified the dropshippers based on their pain points. - In the main headline, why should I care about Derek? Who is he? How do I know he didn't get just "lucky"? These are all questions that pop into my mind when you bring up 1 random testimonial. If you use 1 testimonial, people generally think it's not true. If you use 2, people might think it's luck. If you use 3+, then it's believable. In this case, I'd use a super specific number. - The unique mechanism "Magnetic sales" is just.... meh. It's not great because it's purely curiosity-based and has no logic to it, so my B.S. meters are going off the charts. Also I've seen this same unique mechanism many times before. - There are too many elements to the headline. $10k/mo, Derek, Magnetic Sales, drive profits, FREE, etc. What is it??? 👉 UPDATED HEADLINE COPY: Dropshippers struggling to scale profitably... Install This "Funnel Scaling" Model Into Your Store For FREE To Make 6-Figures In The Next 90 Days Like 410 Others Even if you're a complete beginner