Draft of first six YT ads, feedback?

Hello Adspend.com community! I've finished the first draft of my first six YT ads. These have zero video editing etc. so far...but before I do that I am hoping to receive some feedback. I will plan to join the 7/5 office hours session as well, but wanted to post.

All 6 videos can be found here, separated with different hooks (all have the same story/close).

My initial thoughts:

DRAFT SCRIPTS: QUESTIONS FOR ADSPEND.COM

I think these are all 2-3 minutes too long, especially the Story/Close section. Thoughts?
Several times PromptSmart Pro did not pick up voice, had to manually move the script with hand and you can see that on the video, any tips/remedies for this?

My written scripts, in case it helps, can be found here.

Thanks, all!

Jack

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